Original Thesis Genetically modified organisms are made with the purpose of improving the overall quality of life, but instead they are taking a toll on society's health. Genetically modified foods are an unknown that holds many risks that are detrimental to our health. Genetically modified organisms are having a negative effect on society rather than positive.
Revised Thesis Genetically modified foods were created with the intention to improve overall quality of life. However, they are associated with various environmental, health, and economic risks that render them to actually be more harmful than helpful.